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Friday, August 21, 2015

FF: Demolished Dreams

PHOTO PROMPT – © C.E.Ayr

In this big concrete jungle, all I wanted to do as open a place that would save all the homeless animals. 

I did build a nice building for them, with everything an animal would love. I made the best medical facility. I made a very nice indoor and outdoor garden for them. I made a room look like jungle so that they don’t miss home.

But, the goons in this city hated me for this. Last night, they barged in with torches and brutally killed all my animals and demolished my place.
This is my last letter to this city. I shall never come back.

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18 comments:

  1. Sandra CrookAugust 21, 2015 at 12:48 PM

    Such a shame. Nice story.

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  2. UnknownAugust 21, 2015 at 7:18 PM

    Sadly true tale.

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    1. DeepaAugust 24, 2015 at 3:42 PM

      True in so many places. Thanks for dropping by Shandra :-)

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  3. DaleAugust 22, 2015 at 1:24 AM

    Such good intentions...

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    1. DeepaAugust 24, 2015 at 3:42 PM

      Destroyed by the world,Thanks for dropping by Dale :-)

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  4. Yolanda RenéeAugust 22, 2015 at 7:39 AM

    Such anger, and hate. Good story, though. The sad thing is I learned this building and the mural no longer exist. They were demolished for a new highrise.Your story really fits with that destruction.

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    1. DeepaAugust 24, 2015 at 3:43 PM

      I have seen very beautiful old building destroyed for malls in my city, its painful to see memories dusted to the ground
      Thanks for dropping by Yolanda :-)

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  5. Priceless JoyAugust 23, 2015 at 2:24 AM

    So sad! She was wanting to something good for this world and the citizens destroyed it. Great story, sad ending.

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    1. DeepaAugust 24, 2015 at 3:43 PM

      Happens in so many places, Priceless
      Thanks for dropping by :-)

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  6. DawnAugust 23, 2015 at 1:00 PM

    Her poor heart :(

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  7. Gah LearnerAugust 24, 2015 at 2:51 AM

    That city doesn't deserve your MC. Good story.

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    1. DeepaAugust 24, 2015 at 3:44 PM

      But those homeless animals deserved a good home
      Thanks for dropping by Gabri :-)

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  8. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsAugust 24, 2015 at 4:33 PM

    Dear Dee,

    Sad story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  9. brudbergAugust 24, 2015 at 6:29 PM

    Oh.. homeless is something people hates.. in people and in animals... alas too often torched.

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    1. DeepaAugust 25, 2015 at 10:47 AM

      Realities of life Alas
      Thanks for dropping by Brudberg

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Hey, Your comments would encourage me to write more.
Thanks for dropping in this time.

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